When the time comes the Anzacs go to war,
Those we love don't visit anymore.
As they travel from our shores to other country,
we should be proud of those that gave there lives for the
freedom.
At the gong down of the sun and in the morning,
we will remember them.
star 1 i like the sentence those we love dont visit anymore
ReplyDeletestar 2 i like how you say anzacs instead of soliders
rocket use more similies and metaphors